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Family pains

Stupid children,
run about.
Being loud,
with their shouts.
They get smacked,
then they pout.
But who really cares????

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Written August 19th, 2003

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  • Schwarzes
    August 29, 2003
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    short yet very powerful with its message, a very good point you make here. theyre only children, why smack em around, instead try to understand them, and show them love.