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Can I remember

Have you ever Passed out in the street
watch people walked by and glare at your clothes

Have you ever stolen wristwatch
beat a man up for his shoes

Have you ever had your life crumble?
gone in a instant?

Author notes

My Friend used to do the first part, i've watched the second one, and had ther third one.

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Wow, these are some powerful stories you tell of. There's a terrifying realness to your words.
    Did you meant to captialise the P in the first line? Any reason?
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.