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Rain Dance

Have you ever danced
Naked in the pouring rain
Glided gracefully to
The rhythmic pitter patter
Swung and swayed sweetly
Calm, cool with nary a care
Footloose and fancy free.

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Can't say I have actually
    And these beautiful descriptions tell me I'm missing out on something. Fantastic alliteration.
    I'm not sure, but did you mean 'pitteR patter'.
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.