My heart can sink from one small hit,
But with one deep gaze,
I fall.
That first of my life,
has left me content.
With dirty pirates and scrawny skeletons,
I float away into a centered paragraph.
Long letters and short words,
make up for my depressing time.
No longer do I have no compassion,
for once I am filled with true feelings.
You are my one.
My only.
Telling my darkest secrets seems to be too easy.
With nonsense in my writing,
I end my dark days.
With new beginnings.
Author notes
hmm, Just some thoughts..put down. no need for me to explain my random stringing of words.
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting
Your words show vulnerability and loneliness -
This is pretty good. I really like how you just wrote down all that you were thinking. good work!! keep it up!!!!
Crimson -
No need indeed; their randomness brings free association and causes my memories to flow through time(s) so easily. Wonderfully written through the dark.
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Good write, very creative and interesting. I like your form and your choice of words, it all came together really well. Good job keep it up.
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although i didnt understand the meaning behind it, it kept me interested till the end. Sometimes our pure thoughts makes for excellent poetry. nice write.
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