Blood trickles to the sheets below
Tears fall to the mess
Finishing my sacred dance
Bandages cover my arms
Hiding my scars from existence
I grab a sweater on the way out
She grabs my arms
Shock runs onto her face
Tears well in her eyes
She runs away, disgusted by me
I run to the bathroom
Bringing to life my faults
A contest entry
- Conquering The Blade by Lets Get Tragic.
1200 points, ended July 2, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked
Very deep and sensitive write sis. It is a little bit of a change from the other ones but only a little. You still have the bitter anguish and pain and you write that so well. Wonderful job keep it up.
Never give up
Kate
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Hood-Wink!
Such a deep and dark write. So full of pain and anguish. Very emotional and so filled with wonderful imagery. Great write
You have just been Hood-Winked
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The amazing thing about you is you write so the image of everything happening comes crystal clear. Both of your writes are incrediably good! I pose the same question to you as I did one other entry... How you improve on perfection ~ I'm sorry I really think both are just as good! Your an AWESOME poet! Thanks for entering the contest ~ best of luck to you!
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Ah, I've been through this before... excellent poem, very nicely written, best of luck to you in the contest! ♥
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I'm at a lack of words right now, this poem is amazing and I just cannot find the words to explain how wonderful it is!
Someday very soon, you are going to win a Gold Trophy!!!
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