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-->> Princess Of Pain

                                {xox} The Princess Of Pain {xox}




A broken smile,
And eyeliner tears.
A nightmare parade,
Brings back my fears.



        Night upon night,
        More horrible dreams.
        Cry out each day,
        With silent screams.



Avoiding sleep.
Run and hide.
All these nightmares,
Break me inside.



        Beautifully broken,
        With an empty soul.
        That’s candy coated,
        With a gaping hole.



Catch a glimpse,
In the moon light.
My glitter scars,
They sparkle at night.




...:: I need my CrOwN ::...



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  • lostdream
    July 8, 2007
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    -bows-truly beautiful i loved the work i hope to read more like this i truly think it was worth


    • hopelessly-broken
      July 8, 2007
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      aww thanks, i am veyr glad u liked it! thanks for the applause

      take care
      love HB
      xoxoxoxoxox


  • BeautifulDisaster9
    July 8, 2007

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    Oh My Gawd.

    This is amazing sis! Way to let it all spill out. And so beautifully written too!

    I love it, I love it, I love it.

    I'm in awe. I bow down to you.

    =]

    <3BD9

    • hopelessly-broken
      July 8, 2007
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      nawwwwwwwwwwwww.... thanks sis!!!!

      it means alot that you liked it! and theres no need to bow down to me, im not that good of a writter. btu thanks hehe

      love you heaps
      xoxoxoxox


  • Lost In Dreaming
    July 2, 2007
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    Wow i can really say anything but wow--i love it


  • x-x-x-x-x
    July 2, 2007

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    I think you've done a great job of getting some of the stuff inside out. Is this the one you mentioned you were writing? I like it sweetie, you always write from the heart and it shows. One day chickie, one day Love you! xoxox

    • hopelessly-broken
      July 3, 2007
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      thanks sweetie!! yeah thats the one iv been tryinig to right for aaaaages lol, i actually think it needs something else ot end it properly, but i thought that would do.

      im getting there, i can see that. it sounds crazy coz im always crying, and feeling miserable and complaining to you (sorry), but when i look at where i have been and what has happend, i can tell i have gotten a long way. iv still got along way to go yeah, but im taking it one step at a time.

      love you thanks again
      xoxoxoxoxox


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    July 2, 2007

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    I guess this is just how you were feeling...huh? Keep spilling out your feelings. I hope it helps you feel better about yourself love u heaps and take care xxxx

    • hopelessly-broken
      July 3, 2007
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      lol, well this was how i was feeling when i started it!
      yeah i do feel a bit better tonight actually

      love you too, thanks for the comment


      xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

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