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LoveMoon

Beneath the Moon
Full, spilling out a zest for life
We lay
Togother wrapped in a blanket of love
With gentel laughter and tangible kisses

Bright over head the moon beams
Shares her own love with the world below
Passionatly watching and absorbing
Her full rays carcess our frams
As our bodies rock to a mellody
Deep within our souls:
            Love

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  • choaticrose
    July 2, 2007

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    small and simple. It was drawn into a piece of art that all could enjoy. The Spiritual part consist of the love shown... very nice, very well written.
    ~ChoaticRose

    • SternBlinkin
      July 18, 2007
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      Thank you for your words
      And bring this particular poem to my attention with your thoughts.
      Namaste