In the early hours of a day
I had an incense feeling waving round me
My eyes started to hear my nose
and I obediently followed it quickly
without any waste of precious moments
I strolled slowly into my garden
and am surprised to see a rose bud
blooming into full growth to the brim
and all the fragrance emanated from it
the beauty of nature thus personified in a flowery way
Author notes
a4) Write a poem about something beautiful becoming something beautiful
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This was short but sweet, and I enjoyed reading it, and believe the message was clear.Sometimes short poems are best, and I think in this case it is, so great write.
"My eyes started to hear my nose
and I obediently followed it quickly
without any waste of precious moments"
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