This is me before...
Critical
self righteous
controlled by fear.
Submissive
spoilt
apt to domineer.
Judging
stressed
passive, aggressive.
Whiny
closed
frivolous, excessive.
This is me now...
Free
humble
self reliant.
Strong
controlled
"I can!" is my chant.
Sharing
caring
giving, not to receive.
Accepting
independent
nothing, I can't achieve...
Author notes
I learnt so much about myself through drugs and alcohol.....I wouldn't change a thing...I don't even smoke now.....do have the odd glass of wine and am on antidepressants but hey can't be perfect.....love to all xxx
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- Positivity Stemming from Addiction by aslanlight.
740 points, ended July 8, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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I wrote a similar poem to this only it was listing the things in my flat, such as spoons, works, empty cans, mouldy pizza etc then in the second list books, clean carpet, used toothbrush etc! lol
The transformation when someone gives up drugs and drink is extreme and you've clearly portrayed it in this before and after glimpse of your life.
Peace Georgia
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Ansolutely well self-acclaimed insight and almost a signature piece...explains who you are now, where you were and how you continue to grow with your hope, inspiration..I had alot of those Me Before characteristics too....good job
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