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the knife


I walk around in perfect pain
bathing in eternal flame

slit my wrists
lay me down

push me in
let me drown

tie the knot
pull the rope

stab my heart
drain my hope

drag the blade
across my chest

just be sure
to do your best

take my things
take my life

just let me
keep the knife

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  • listentoHIM
    July 3, 2007
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    nice. i really liked the ending.