Have you ever
Ridden a Ferris Wheel ride? I did...
Having conveniently,
forgotten my fear of heights
Ended up stalled on the very tiptop
I cried my living guts out,
They quickly unloaded me
To the consternation of other riders.
Author notes
A day that is seared into my psyche, and has me trembling at the thought of it even now.
In a list
A contest entry
- have you ever ... ? by DancingRed.
300 points, ended July 30, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh this is quite a story you have to tell. I don't think I quite like heights either, though perhaps not to this extent.
Well written and expressed. Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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Thanks for this review. lol
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I felt this and I didn't look down. To the consternation of the other entries in this contest you will most likely win the gold.
Love,
Amera ♥
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TY
Amera, your piece "My Tiger" is a masterpiece, that's why it
has won the trophies that it has, but more than the trophies
It is just that good to qualify as a masterpiece. Those are very hard to write, but you have one. lol and thanks for this review and encouragement. lol
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you poor thing...I actually love heights...it's spinning around that I hate...well done!
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Iggy, you always amaze me, thanks for your review of this one. My most painful to date. hahaha lol
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Good
I had the same experience a while ago, just not so extreme. I was scared stiff when I was stopped at the top so that other people could be switched out at the bottom. It wasn't even a very big Ferris Wheel. It was at a city fair. Good write, though. It brought back the memories.
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Trust me, I can so relate. hahaha lol
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