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I have

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Have you ever
quoted a Maroon 5 song
in order to get the boy next door
to fall madly in love with you?
"this city's made us crazy and we must get out"
yeah. I have.
We're still here...

A contest entry

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  • risewiththesmoke
    November 2, 2007
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    i like it


  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Haha, no I haven't. Maybe I should try it though.
    I love the specifics of your words. Beautiful images, clear expressions.
    Great poem & thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • thoudreamchild
    July 3, 2007

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    =)

    No, I haven't. But this poem is awesome. I also love the picture.

    ~thoudreamchild


  • Number 13
    July 2, 2007
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    aww i like this.
    It's sad but it's neat


  • Exodus gold member
    July 2, 2007

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    This made me sad. I don't know why, because I've read pieces that are far more melancholy, but this one really got to me. I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you for posting it for us all to read

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