Have you ever
spent three months,
on you own,
driving a campervan
there and back,
across Australia,
from the Indian Ocean
to the Pacific coast.
Making overnight stops
in caravan parks,
or staying for a day or two
with friends?
Author notes
40 words
A contest entry
- have you ever ... ? by DancingRed.
300 points, ended July 30, 2007, 22 entries
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Comments
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Nope, two weeks with the family is the most I've done.
I like this poem; it feels realistic. The way you've chosen to describe it all is very casual and relaxed, but your words really come to life. It sounds a lovely thing to do, actually.
Great poem and thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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