have you ever
wanted to cut so deep
you never felt the pain?
knowing your whole world was collapsing
but there was nothing
you could do to stop it
knowing that, in fact
you were the cause
of your own demise
Author notes
*shrugs* bah.....prob;y not gonna win but that's okay
A contest entry
- have you ever ... ? by DancingRed.
300 points, ended July 30, 2007, 22 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm sorry if you're feeling this way.
But if it's any consolation your words tell a powerful story and beautifully express such strong feelings of hopelessness & despair.
Great poem & thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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um.....wow...i read it !!!!
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i love it
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