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Have You Ever...

Have you ever felt
Like your entire world
Is the eyes of one person?

Sensed your soul meet theirs’
To transcend to an unbelievable level
Of blissful joyous dreams?

Have you ever felt
Love enough
You would die for them?

Author notes

I have.

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Love is a truly wonderful thing; your words beautifully express feelings of such a powerful love.
    It seems a happy and hopeful piece. While these questions reach deep, they manage to stay on top of the world.
    I'm really liking the first three lines especially, and I'd have to answer yes to it.
    Thanks so much for entering.

    DancingRed.


    • Shadow-Phoenix
      July 3, 2007
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      Love is the most wonderous thing...

      Thanks very much for your sweet comment, DancingRed.
      ~ Shadow-Phoenix.