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I want to live

I want to live
I mean really live
Explore the world and get to know it
Feel my bare feet on the rich soil
Spin in circles and just wonder at the beauty
Feel the wind going through my hair as the car window is down
I want to live
I want to find who I am and explore
Get to know myself and those around me
I've lost so much time
I want to gain back that time
Make the most of my life
I want to live
Live the life of someone who is truly happy
Explore the earth as my ancestors did
Get in touch with the world around me
Just learn to love myself
I just want to live!

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  • BloodyCrystalEmbers
    July 3, 2007

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    Nicole,I hope you really do feel this as deeply as your poem shows you do,Lately the last couple months I feel the same,we both will live and come to accept the beauty in our time,the wonder of the moment,and to cherish the little things,the tiny minutes of happiness we may feel...this poem is so inspirational knowing what we have been though as people it shows a lot of charaacter that you are willing to go on even after going through defeat...I hope the many days that come for you in the future are prosperous and full of happiness,stay strong butterfly and take care...love ya




    ~~~Terri Anna~~~