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Life is a huge transit

Infants crawlling into toddlers,
walking  children
turning into teens,
then adults.
nomads
in life's chain?

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Simply amazing metaphor, and it's well backed up with powerful images.
    You have yourself an unneeded extra space in the second line.
    Great piece and thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • penman gold member
    July 2, 2007
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    Wonderful

    So visual. Very well done.


  • February Moon gold member
    July 2, 2007

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    I like how you related this to society in general. Good luck, and thank you for entering.
    Chelsea

  • February Moon gold member
    July 2, 2007
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    Prompt: Nomads