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I'll be here

Don't be afraid
to let me come in
break down the walls
you've been hiding in
Know that I see you for who
you really are...

I'f you reach out
I'll take your hand
When you fall down
I'll pick you up again
I never wanted to see
you loose your way


(chorus)
I know I'll be here
When the world's to much to bare
I know I'll be here
When nobody else seems to care
go ahead and cry
go ahead and shout
just get it all out
and lean on me now
and know that I am here....


yesterdays gone
tomarrow will pass
today only comes once
lets make it last
don't you remember the day
we said goodbye..

I have a letter
you once wrote to me
said you were scared
of who you'd one day be
dont be afraid of who you are
your amazing

(chorus)

Go ahead and lash out in anger
at the world who turns you away
Go ahead and cry when you realise
I've always loved you this way

(chorus)

just go ahead and lean on me know
and know Im always here...

Author notes

inspired by "keep holding on" by Avril Lavigne from Eragon

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  • crystallynnbradford
    September 12, 2007

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    this is really awesome...i really like how the chorus goes and there is an awesome flow....these may be some of the best lyrics that I have read on allpoetry, congrats!
  • Ankeeta silver member
    September 1, 2007

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    FAB!!!...there are few spell errors though...but I am looking forward if you would convert it in an audio...it would run so smoothly

    keep going

    Ankita

  • Kristen Corpse
    August 27, 2007

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    This would be really nice to hear to music, I do believe. I loved the ending of it. Where the "bridge" persay would be. I liked the message behind this as well. Everyone needs somsone to be there for them and not everyone has that. Nicely written piece here, my friend. Keep up the good work.

    Always and Forever,
    Kristen ♥

  • DarkBlaze128
    July 31, 2007
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    good write

    it was a bit hard to fallow, and the choris changed alot, but i definently got the point, good job, keep writeing

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