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Wishing Star

Little wishing star... once again I seek your aid
Like all the times before, by myself, I feel betrayed
For I have fallen silent to a love beheld inside
I longed to let him know, but instead I chose to hide
I dare not speak a word - for this, I am ashamed
Listen close and hear my heart beat to the rhythm of his name
Little wishing star... is there no remedy or cure?
For he's nowhere in sight - upon his face I look no more
Little wishing star... but what would I have said?
What words could have told him
Of the thoughts that filled my head?
Now I make this wish that I could drown in his brown eyes
To watch the way they twinkle and leave me hypnotized
I know if I were in his arms I'd surely melt away
Like snow that still remains on a sunny, warm spring day
To hear his voice again, I could walk a thousand miles
I miss the way he made me laugh, the way he made me smile
So, little wishing star... please grant me one last chance
To reveal what I am feeling and forget the circumstance
Desperately, I'd kill to find this man I barely know
Oh, but little wishing star...
With all my heart, I love him so

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  • MagazinesFall
    July 2, 2007

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    JUMPS FOR JOY!

    I love it, i love it, i love it!
    I'm so happy someone finally used a title!
    This is amazing and I love everything about it, I was glued to it the whole time!