Weather forecast:
radiation showers;
no sunblock needed --
for the dead.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Now this one is very interesting and very well done indeed. Hmm, I'm sure the dead realize that after all they've been through
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This is fabulous!!! congrats on the silver!!! much deserved
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Bel, this is gorgeous beyond words.
You took a different, very intriguing perspective on the prompt and incorporated a stunning metaphor. The images flow off the metaphors so vividly and gracefully, leaving the reader in awe at such a well written poem. The structure is random and chaotic, this really seems to develop the theme even more. Excellent job, I am amazed. Best of luck. -
Your prompt:
Red balloons and nuclear wars
Best of luck
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