Deep down I’m feeling blue,
But then what else is new
It’s not the first time and it won’t be the last
I can’t wait till all this has passed
When all my demons leave me alone,
And I can lie in my corner crying on my own
Won’t you come rescue me and save me from despair,
Reach out your hand and show me you care
Come into my darkness and hold me tight
Stay with me in this endless night
I need an angel to watch over me,
And it is you I want that angel to be
Author notes
I'm feeling all sad deep down inside and I only want one thing.
A contest entry
- Shot Down Angel by Dead Hair.
450 points, ended July 28, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time For You To Take A Chance ~ Round One by Tears and Raine.
320 points, ended January 26, 2008, 176 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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MMM, a beautiful poem at best. I enjoyed reading this.
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Aww this is excellent, I really liked it and I'm sure many people can (unfortunately) relate to it. Good luck in the contest and take care xxx
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I really think The Shot Down Angel would be able to relate to this, I picture her someone who yearns for romance/companionship/comfort. Lovely poem!
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Thanks, I thought it might be someone talking to her and asking if she would be his angel and love him.
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