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a sombre tea party


fingertips meet;
tears are invisible ink
writing stories I read.


A contest entry

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  • WritingKitten
    July 4, 2007

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    Excellent. Written like a pro... you'll be writing books by time you are 20.

    Katie


  • Ryno gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    *eachoes The Burning Year* this is a very inspirational piece... awesome job, good luck in the contest...


    Ryan


  • The Burning Year
    July 2, 2007
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    "Not bad" ??

    what do people know

    "It's great" !!
    thats my shortcoming


  • Zimora de Rhyven
    July 1, 2007
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    Not bad

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