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lure


faeries float
like feathers

over lulling waves.

balance lost;

feet fall from bridge
with fascination.

In a list

A contest entry

Critical comments are most welcome.

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  • miss midnight
    July 11, 2007

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    "feet fall from bridge
    with fascination."

    oh.man. that
    line is
    wonderful.

    you are such an amazing writer.
    &&& for some reason your not on my favorites
    (which you should be)
    so i gotta go add you now. lol

  • Laguna Lover
    July 6, 2007
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    beautiful. absolutely beautiful.


  • forwardfalling
    July 4, 2007
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    awesome write. it's worded very well.


  • Ryno
    July 3, 2007

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    Really like the concept I've gotten from this write, how even beauty is not enough/can collapse? I don't know, lol, but that is what I got from this and i really like this... awesome idea, gratz on your HM


    Ryan


  • Celticmoon
    July 1, 2007
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    Oh I like this Nicely done and very cleverly written. Thank you for entering and good luck!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Celticmoon
    July 1, 2007

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    PROMPT: Fatal Fascination OR Burbon Street Blues


    Choose only one please

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