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Swordmaster

Spinning blades of fatal fury

    Silver crescents winging flight
Holding gaze until

Lethal captivation kills

Author notes

prompt: Fatal Fascination
15 words

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  • Dragons Lady
    August 17, 2007

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    Positively medieval. I loved it. It expresses an idea very powerfully in so few words. Well done. Congratulations on the trophy.


  • azlyn gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    WOW!!! So much power in so few words! I am so totally impressed! This is positively medieval! Congratulations on your trophy!!!
    Blessings,
    Azlyn


  • Celticmoon
    July 1, 2007
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    WOW!

    This is rather intense for the prompt! I'm impressed Thank you for entering and good luck!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Celticmoon
    July 1, 2007

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    PROMPT: Fatal Fascination OR Burbon Street Blues


    Choose only one please