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Synonym

Tiny seed
sprout and blossom--
Up! Skyward and unbounded
(infinite as my love)

Author notes

First try with a naani.

A contest entry

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  • The Burning Year
    July 2, 2007
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    you are
    good
    at
    what you
    do

    (very).


  • Samplette gold member
    July 2, 2007

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    I thik this is beautiful. I like how you amplify the last line. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam