I'll make myself new,
and forget about you.
Leave you in the past,
for someone who will last.
You won't cross my mind,
new love I'll find.
I'll make myself new,
and forget about you.
New day, new way...
I'll plan my day,
even take time to play.
Too busy for rest,
but room for jest.
Skies will be brighter,
I AM a fighter.
That's all I have to say,
I'm doing this MY WAY!
I won't think of you,
I won't be blue,
now that we're through...
Darling, I Love You.
Author notes
This was for a contest, but missed the deadline. Please tell me what you think as I continue to try my pen at poetry. All is well in my life and marriage, this was a preset theme. Thanks
Please tell me what you think
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nice; I am not trained in poetry so I look for rhythm and image.
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You did well with the theme. After reading your notes I realized. You had me caught in the dilemma of the break up. Keep writing. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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This is beautifully written!
I remember reading this prior
and think you did a great job
with it! Well done and thanks
a lot for sharing it here.
Keep up the wonderful work!
Jeremy0826 -
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This was well penned piece my sweet friend. Needs a tad adjusting, fine tuning and it would be awesome.Just some mispellings.I loed the way it flowed from your heart. Thank you friend, for showing a desire to write.
Tory -
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Thank you, I'll look through that
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment
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