Isn't it cool,
that I have a pool?
Isn't it awsome
that I have a possum?
Isn't it Neto,
that I have Cheetos?
Isn't it nice,
that I like ice?
Isn't it remarkable
that I am sparkable?
All these things are totaly remarkable.
A contest entry
- The POW ~* ~* ~* by Arkbear.
500 points, ended August 5, 2007, 11 entries
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Very different entry ~
Thank you for taking the time to enter....
....but I can not scream...POW!!!....with this poem ~
....and the Rules also state that you are not allowed to
respond from your poems page....as this is an
anoymous contest, and I can see your
responses which break your anonymity ~
Please try again next week ~
Bear ~
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Belated welcome to this site. Glad to see you writing so many poems, commenting and entering contests. Main thing here is to have fun. Cute rhythm and rhyme in these lines - easy to read and understand.
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peace
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Awwwww.
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oh my god. is this a joke?
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Some of it is true, some if it isen't
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Great Rhyming
I hope My Pool is like that! 
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Oh, it will be all right .:)
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love it
that is Neto!!! -
Lol everything seems so easy to write yet I could never write it lol this is really good!
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