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Playfully Passive






Silhouettes dance
          upon walls as hours
of pleasurable playfulness pass;


passive persona
       with docile energy
is lassoed
       by dominate seductress.


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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 1, 2007
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    Excellent, Bel!
    Your words are always truly beautiful!
    All the best to you...always


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 1, 2007
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    wonderful take with great imagery and alliteration. Loved it. great take on the prompt. Hugs, Bunny


  • Sokarjo
    July 1, 2007

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    Ooooo..... lovely take on the prompt! Fantastic write here, dear. Best of luck in the contest!

  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 1, 2007
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    Your Prompt is: "Absence of Malice"