Advancing night
Welcomed darkness
How else to discern
Luminous stars?
Author notes
Quickie #17
Prompt: "Darkness falls on my soul"
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
450 points, ended July 2, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow two sentances? you are just terribly good at writing those small ones! If i were to try ever i would probably fail misrebily anyway brilliant poem and even more brilliant imagery.
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Exactly! How else to discern them indeed.
I liked this piece. Good choice in background. Felt as if it were the night sky...and your words were stars. Loved it! -
Lovely! What a fantastic take on the prompt. It's beautiful, and so true! Best of luck!
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Love your take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
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Good luck.
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