Shadows Steal
Briefly Shaken
But Not Alone
Now Darkly Taken
Author notes
prompt: Darkness Falls on my soul
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
450 points, ended July 2, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great use of rhyme even with so few words! Congrats on bronze!
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Thank you!
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Well written and constructed. Great job with a prompt. I really never try these but perhaps it would be a nice challenge. Best of luck in the contest!
Blessings Of Peace,
Azlyn
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Thanks dear! I was upset with my first quickie because I didn't fully understand the rules and the host judged before I could finish my write. But once I better understood what was expected, I've really enjoyed them. I think it's a good exercise for the poet; when you're limited to ten words, you have to make each one count. Encourages a better vocabulary, for certain.
Anyway, you should try one sometime! You're an amazing writer. Thanks again for your comments. Blessed be!
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Wow. Liked the format of this piece...as well as the easy, steady rhyme scheme. Great job. I think that, by capitalizing each word, you added more importance to each word. Good job indeed.
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Thank you very much. I thought it did seem stronger when I used capitals. Thanks for your comments.
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