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Regret

regret:
heart gnawed and calloused,
crimson slivers
of the past

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prompt: Darkness Falls on my soul

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  • Sokarjo
    July 1, 2007

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    Lovely. Great word choices, good take on prompt. I especially like "crimson slivers of the past". Great words. Good luck!