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Quickie

Whip me wind me- into a daze
Strip me find me- through this haze
Brush me rush me- soon to pretty
Hush me crush me- what a quickie













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  • Sokarjo
    July 1, 2007
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    It's only supposed to be 10 words, but I really like this. Good one. Good luck!