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Cheating

unfaithful
love
pours acid
on my
fragile ego

I'm shriveled.


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prompt: darkness of the soul

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  • Sokarjo
    July 1, 2007

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    ooo, nice word choices here. Good job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest!


  • freestallion
    July 1, 2007

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    I really like this one (Check the spelling of shriveled though) Good luck on the contest!