As I walk by it calls my name,
It's haunting me
But I promised you I won't play this game....
I reach for the razr,
And it kisses my wrist,
I'm gently absorbed in a blood seaping bliss....
I wake up each day
&& dress up in black,
I want to be pretty....
I just cannot turn back.
My hair covers my eyes,
So I can hide from all the of lies,
The wristbands,
The razors,
The hair,
The black....
The
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S
S
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N
And how it ruins my life...
I'm hanging onto you,
And then I'll have nothing left to hold onto.
&& so i hide behind my mask,
My black abyss,
My black hole is...
My happiness...
The dark corners are my friends...
DEPRESSION where the world never ends,
It cycles day after day
Inside of your mind
Over and over
forward and forward,
Behind and behind....
♥Depression♥
Author notes
#1 Poems about how depression makes you feel/how it affects your life.(*******)
A contest entry
- Options! *Depression, Suicide, Love, Anger.* (My First Contest!) by Jessi-desensytized.
525 points, ended July 2, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Do you have what it takes by Improv Machinery.
400 points, ended July 5, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like this, you did a great job with it. Depression really sucks, I know and I hate it. good write
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A good flow to it... + nice presentation & delivery.
...One step back in order to take two steps forward! GL with everything <3
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i really like how you brought the reality of depression to life in this poem. great write and gooood luck in the contest.
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wow i think you did a great job on this poem, I think you mixed a whole bunch of the options in my contest... i like that... best of luck!
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