I Choose to be Me!
I am Me!
I am no one else.
I am not part of the crowd,
not the person who
is always where people are.
I am the one
who likes to wander and explore.
I would like to stray from the crowd,
and go to places no one has ever seen.
There are two choices in life:
To be part of the crowd,
or to be different and distinct.
I choose to be the latter.
I choose to be Me!
I choose to strive
for what I like
and for what I believe in.
I choose to be different,
I choose to be Me!
By: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
My real name is not my username (lol)
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest - 2 hours, 20 lines, 20 entries by Maatkara.
450 points, ended July 17, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well stated affirmation of personal choice
It would have been better to use your own wording completely to be truly "different and distinct" though
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This is an emphatic statement of individuality. I'm like that too, I don't realize that I am different because I'm doing what I think needs to be done. The repetition of "I choose" gives a clear message that we are choosing too, even if it is conformity. Good luck!

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I like the strong proclamation and the sense of deep personal conviction that I feel when I read your words here. It's powerful and enlightening. Good luck in the contest!



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