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Destiny's Quill

Missing image
When I was three
I felt my soul
was older than the world I found,

looking up those rising steps,
with legs too short
to climb to heaven.


Spirit, free, is sense to feather,

filling wing inside of quill
with wave to wind
in air to lift,

something gathered from before
in service to a greater motion,

where word goes looking for divine.


Plan to pulse is reformation,
and I was born to write in crypt
what it is than calls in circle,

evolution's echo chamber
reverberating river's flow,
as channeled grace
to guide me further.


So here I walk,

sipping skies to glide
and flower billowed sighs
of love in cotton,

looking for an angel's image
to hold as sacred lover's touch,

the one who knows
my past life's name,

as mountain lying down in reverence.








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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 12, 2007
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    Congrats, Mr. Mountain, this is beautiful


  • Sonja
    July 8, 2007
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    Destiny is the strange path in our lives. Good luck with your destiny
    ~Sonja~


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 1, 2007

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    this is lovely....Such a wandering spirit flows through this page....so beautiful, so wondrous are the thoughts in every line...I just love this ...One of your best!

    Lynda


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    July 1, 2007
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    beautiful


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 1, 2007

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    Pure beauty in words.
    I can't do anything but
    smile, and wish you well
    in the contest. Lane


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 1, 2007

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    "looking for an angel's image
    to hold as sacred lover's touch,

    the one who knows
    my past life's name,

    as mountain lying down in reverence."

    I love this poem, dear Scribe. I also love how your mind deciphers & determines the images flying through your consciousness with feathered fingers. Angels look for you, too, my Friend. Good luck in Lynda's contest, Sweetie. Wanda

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