As distant as his heart shall be,
a fearful fright at best.
Far from here a frightening tale,
scorned and turned to jest.
But this is more than what it is,
or what it seems to be.
A simple tale of fear near pain,
of running from destiny.
his heart a far, the fear now close,
she shivers from something like cold.
with no more blood to bleed,
she cries, wanting him to hold.
Most likely fearing what to come,
or what will come to pass,
as distant as this boy may be,
he is always in her heart.
Narrow bed in which she lies,
tear stained face and sheet.
surrounded by walls of the insane
with tickets upon a spouses feet.
Far from here his heart will weep,
this fearful fright a test,
she is far away from him,
shivering at best.
A contest entry
- This Isn't What You Think!!!! by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 3, 2007, 18 entries
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yeah, I am in the same frame of mind as Marc, Shell. I also think this sort of poem doesn't come from out of the blue unless something is on someones' mind. Now I think I know what it might be about, but I won't say here.
Call me later or something, I'm worried about you =] remember, i'm Davey, you can tell me anythin, you know that right? =]
speak to you soon (hopefully)
SaintJimmy aka Davey -
I really like this... and I can find a lot of the emotion in it that brings tears to my eyes. fantastic write
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First of all, great write! I really enjoyed this one.
Shell, whats up? a poem like this doesnt come from you unless something is bugging you or your worried about something....
It may seem like i'm 1000 miles away from you and I havnt spoken to you in ages, but I am still here, still the same person that keeps your secrets.
I'm alot easier to talk to now anyway, i've grown up alot since December.....
Smile, you've probally been through worse....
*Hugs*
Worried Marc
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Very well done! This has substance and true, deep meaning
I very much enjoyed this! Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest!
Much enjoyed!!! -
This is an interesting one Shell. I've just read it like 4 times and I seem to be able to find something else I really like about it everytime I read it.
I'm loving your poetry at the moment, its coming on so well, keep writing
:} Check out my new motto on my page, I smiled when I came up with it hehe
SaintJimmy
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