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Climax

The Warm Sensations Of Your Touch Had Seduced Me Many Times Before,
The Memories Rolled Through My Mind As Your Soft Lips Brushed Against Mine,
Nerves Sparked As Your Sweet, Sweet Poison Crept To My Tastes,
And Shivers Down Your Spine Let Me Know My Sugared Venom Had Reached Yours,

Dancing In The Dark, Our Tongues Met With The Most Delicate Interaction,
Our Fingertips Met And Hands Locked For A Moment In A Captured Dream,
As You Gently Reached Over My Side, Our Eyes Met And Locked In A Mystical Trance,
Tracing My Velvety Curves, Your Fingertips Ran A Line Down My Trembling Body,
Eventually Reaching The Smooth, Silky Pressure Points That Held Explosions Of Pleasure,

Gently, Your Fingertips Ran Down And Pushed Themselves Inside My Wet, Throbbing Core,
And Back Out To Rub My Clit Softly,
Butterfly Kisses Down My Centre Slowly Followed The Mini Heat Waves Of Tingles I Had Received,
I Felt Your Smooth, Moist Tongue Slide Over My Clit And Delve Deep Down Into My Golden Centre,

Rich Juices Flowing Less Controlled, The More Your Sweet Rhythm Sang To My Soul,
My Imagination Was Flickering Through All The Images Of You And Me
And My Hands Slid Round Your Body To Caress Your Breasts,

Tingling Sensations Wrapped My Body In A Blanket Of Heat,
And An Uncontrollable Urge To Moan Gripped At My Throat,
Squeezing Gently And Tensing Every Muscle I Knew I Had,
The Climax Clung To Every Nerve In My Body.

Sliding Back Up My Body, The Smile On Your Face Grew
And Closing My Eyes, I Felt Your Soft Silky Hair, Brush Against My Breasts
As You Lay Your Head On My Stomach.

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  • LadyOfFate
    July 27, 2007

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    very nicely done, but choppy from what I can see. I don't know about others, but it was hard to see where one line or phrase ended and another began. it is nicely written no doubt about that. but Like it none the less. keep up the good work