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Terrorism ...Pleiades

 

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 Terrorists 

 Torturing us 

 Time after time 

 Too many people get hurt 

 Too many countries suffers

 Too much damage is done

 Time to put a stop to it...NOW

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Author notes

there is no need for Terrorism ...its just cruel... I wander wots in there heart coz it sure aint love... xxx

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    July 1, 2007

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    Yeah, like I said to your master, we are stupid creatures who never learn from the mistakes we make... well done on giving terrorism a good kick hun

    Karen


  • tawk gold member
    July 1, 2007

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    Yes we need to stop it now! I so agree. What a wonderful poem against Terrorism! Brav


  • DJ Harley silver member
    July 1, 2007

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    very nice poem cheeky terrorism is just a bunch of people who dont care about them self or nobody else they rather kill them self and destroy as many people they can, I dont know why they we have to have all this killing in the world, I just wish we could all get along,

    Your master 4 ever


  • flyingphoenix
    July 1, 2007

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    This is very powerful, it also has your honest opinions behind it, with the facts we all know. I like the form, and with all the lines begining with 'T' it almost makes it have a 'harder' sound to it, which ties in nicely to the subject.

    Thanks for entering!!

    Webber