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Nubian Lust

Nubian Goddess your beauty overwhelms
Your wide brown eyes beckon ecstasy
As I lean in for my first taste
I feel your soft black skin tremble
At the sensuality of my touch
Our lips pressing into oblivion
Our tongues dancing together
Twisted within a love song
My hands run pleasantries over your breasts
So firm and robust
As my lost hand plays a melody
Upon your firm clit
I am wet and throbbing
Feeling the dew
Seep out of your warmth
My kisses follow
A trail of desire
Down your navel
And into your canal
Probing in and out
My tongue mesmerizes
Your wanting
With passion
Driving you into climax
Thighs clenching
Voices full of moaning
You explode in a riff
Of the very song
My fingers played
Upon your essence

Author notes

I don't know if this is freaky enough? If not holla and I'll spice it up!

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  • secberm
    January 20, 2008

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    Um... This is uh... Obviously erotic and arousing. Imaginative as in I can (LOL DEFINATELY) picture this. The flow is beautiful and it rolls easily. I can see you speaking this.

    Well done, sister. Write on! (Nah, seriously... Write on.)
    DEZ


  • Rele anmwe
    July 2, 2007

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    O no, you are a lesbian, alright, I'm loving you. He he, I knew you had it in you, what a big turn on. i like that a whole lot, I mean I really like that. OUch, bad girl, blueyez gone wild.


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 2, 2007

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    well done girlie...sizzle sizzle....i think its freaky enough...a lady on the street but a freak in the bed...lol..love the last 2 lines...totally ahemm....capped it off...good luck !


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 2, 2007

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    IT WORKS FOR ME!

    You explode in a riff
    Of the very song
    My fingers played
    Upon your essence

    And what a heavenly and divine essence it must have been - for I can almost smell, feel, touch, and taste it from the beautiful and sensual piece that you have written here. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Hidden-Angels
    July 2, 2007

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    i liked it so much i droped some saliva on my self hahahaha

    i loved it i love how i can visualize it in my head how two lovers can comunicate their love it was so spicy it gave me a heart burn.lol


  • Envelope
    July 1, 2007
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    well that was...intense

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