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Old Friend, New Things


My friend so dear we'd never thought twice
It was late at night so we stretched on the bed
My friend side by side at touch and at ease
It started with a smile, a light nervous giggle
What was hints of play soon gave way to caresses
My hand down soft silken back, hers cross my waist
So different from him, her skin soft and suptle
Eyes dark and intrigued we leaned into a kiss
Gentle at first, cautious.
Forbidden fruit, we moved closer to taste more
Soon it was tongues darting in and out, vying for control
My hand reached down further as hers stroked my breast
Passions arroused, her hands searching me
The power play increases, nipples getting hard
I push my hand between her legs my fingers finding her entrance
She pushed deeply stroking two fingers in as I gasp
With both smile into the kiss find each other wet.
A bite to her shoulder had her moaning
her legs opening more for me, wanting
I add more fingers as her juices run slick
Her hand grabs my hair and pulls back my head
Her teeth mark my neck then breasts
I whine with pleasure as her finger strokes in me deeper
My legs start to quiver as I nearly cum
The battles goes on for who can do better
We roll up together and strandle one another
A hand up each others wetness hitting the spot just right
our other hand digging trails down each others back
Each with teeth buried into the others shoulder
Stiffling moans of pleasure as we cum together
Hips grinding, bodies quivering in a sweat.
Slowly teeth lessen, nails digging in becomes a caress
Shivering and shaking we release each other slowly
We lean back and eyes lock
Knowing we have a new secret to share
With a quirk of a smile she says,
"Sleep over at my place tomorrow, fuck the boyfriends"

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  • LadyOfFate
    July 29, 2007

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    first question.... what is vying?

    besides that confusion a wonderful peace. Sounds like Friends with benifits to me. well maybe they will be like that, then drop the boyfriends and date each other. who knows. but wonderfully erotic


  • sheltered
    July 1, 2007

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    Very nice. Your wording is superb. Great flow throughout. All in all a great little story on one of my favorite subjects.


  • Patched Up Ragdoll
    July 1, 2007

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    Hehe...very well written.

    You never cease to amaze.

    *jumps in freezing pool*



  • Schmonny
    July 1, 2007
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    this is really exciting. i wish i could be a lesbian :\


  • Laura
    July 1, 2007

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    ohh this is amazing the imagery is fantastic almost made me want to becaome a lesbian hehehe well done to you xxx

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