she feels a little distant now
and almost too far away
to far to feel the difference
to far to feel your touch
numb to every kiss you gave
ignorant to what she gave in return
wishing she could end it now
to afraid to give up on whats come so far
doesn't know the difference between the hurting and the rage
or why you were so important to brightening her day
i feel so unbelievably distant now
and like you're a little too far away
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i miss you a little too much.
Please tell me what you think
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oh my god.
That was such a long time ago. Why do YOU still care? I wrote that poem in January.
I don't know if you bothered to read my other poems, but I was pretty depressed. Everyone close to me in my family was dying, and I found out my dad has lied to me and still smokes. Despite everything Logan did for me, I needed a friend that wasn't my boyfriend.
Now what I should have done from the very beginning was reached out to someone that I was already close-ish to. But I was being stupid, and I was so caught up in my emotions and the crud that was going on that I saw you as my only way out. "Why didn't I say anything?" How about "Why didn't you give me the chance?"
But, you know, none of that matters anymore. If I can somehow bug you without ever actually talking to you, then fine. Whatever. You never bugged me until you found it too overwhelming to help me.
After that, I was angry, and now, I could seriously care less. I had completely overlooked someone who has helped me so much now. Even if it is a little late, this time it was my fault.
So just let it go, and keep ignoring me, and I'm pretty sure I'll survive. -
This Is exactly how I feel bout an ex of mine. He now has a gf whom is a little too clingy since they only been dating a week. He told me recently he wanted me back and to split with this girl. I dont know If I can believe him. I miss him like crazy and want him back but not at her or my expense. I can live with my own pain but not hers.
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It's good
It's really good. I like the couplets, it gives it a haunting feel. Gave me the chills. Good luck.
Caitlin
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Good poem
I like the way you have put this over it is touching the interesting thing is how small the distance can somtimes be.
regards
perdix
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haha i read it! from sierra
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It's nice in it's simplicity and it's complex emotions. good work. -D.
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This is very good, one small error is the second stanza, both lines should start with too, not to.
Nice write
♥whisper
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Great!
Nice flow and word choice!
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long distance sucks im in a relation ship like that now and frankly as i said before it sucks...you poem captures my emotions and makes them feel at home, knowing there are more lovers across the miles than just me and mine.
Josh Rain.
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