Darling it's truely amazing the way you look
With those $2 shop plastic tiaras
And the friendship rings of the many boys
That landed a spot in your jeans
Comparing to the last time we spoke
Your'e not happy
[the scars are hidden beneath ((emily the strange)) arm warmers]
Who are you trying to kid?
Lipgloss kisses ended in intoxicated whispers
You left ringing in the ears of your friends
Who helped solved the lust
That soaked your jeans
Scarlet tinted hair matched the razorblade
Hidden in the sole of your fake stiletto's
Are you more than constant self abuse?
Lies, Sex and intoxicating dreams
[and now this mark remains, it will never go away]
My intials are carved perfectly into your heart
love♥♥ can leave you blind
I graffitied your soul with
i
♥
u's
And reoccuring symbols of affection
Just so you'd [never] be lonely again
And yet,
Here we are.
[the mirror points out your flaws perfectly]
I'm just a bubblegum flavour
that just didn't last
You took one sweet bite
and spat me out fast
The razorblade kisses had you moaning
I'm sure it was my name I heard [baby]
Letting go of our problems with alcohol
We ended up faking a marriage
And making [l-l-love♥♥]
[or so we said]
Your lips dripping with lust and denial
A hop, skip and a jump and you left
Until the next time baby
I'll ♥ you
Author notes
Ok. So it's like a guy is noticing what his ex was when they were together, and he was blind to see it.
[New Contest]
Option 4.
Write about that dirty little idiot you call your ex
[Stage fright blinded my eyes]
[Old contest]
From First To Last - I Liked You Better Before You Were Naked On The Internet
A contest entry
- Musical Inspiration by MelissahhMidnite.
513 points, ended July 12, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Taste the [c h a o s] in her mouth, dolly♥ by LucyLightning.
600 points, ended July 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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gooooooooood job!
I love love loveeeeeed it! =]]]
Great emotion
& beautiful words.
loved it.
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Good luck in the contest! -
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nice. as soon as this started i knew what song it was. and you can really write, even when i though matt was the finish line. <3<3 i think i love you.
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Oh.. wow. this is the best dirty pretty (or something close to it) I have read in a long time.
This is so.. excellent the words flow so well, and I couldn't stop reading until I was all the way through it.
wow this was sweeeeeeet.
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This is brilliant, I love it. So well written.
[take.care]
x.
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Thats Awesome. the lyrics tie in with your own words.
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