I think i'll
go back to the world
the one i'd built
before you
And take out
the colored pieces
of our memories
when all had held true
and sit reminescing
Author notes
It's not finished not by a long shot. This is what i have done today.
Please tell me what you think
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Short but sweet
May you prefer extensive writes; however this one seems to be just right. Although i did identify that new thought beginning.."and sit reminescing". Nevertheless, if this was dropped i think it could be finished. Keep up the good work
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Thank you~! ^__^ Sorry, I seldom get on because I don't have a computer. Anyway, I might continue on or just take out that last line and leave it. *shrugs*
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