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razorblade kisses and poison romances

you say dead romantic...
i say muderous bastard...
you say you never killed anyone...
i say you killed me...

razorblade kisses...
and...
poison romances...

you say it wasnt your fault...
i say it was all for you...
you say you hate me...
i say i love you...

razorblade kisses...
and...
poison romances...

you say you dont care...
i say i do...
you started this...
but...
im gonna finish it...

razorblade kisses...
and...
poison romances...

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  • stavykm gold member
    August 30, 2007
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    Blown Away

    I wished I had more points to award more trophies for my contest because you were my 3rd pick. Excellent write and I already commented below. Thanks again see you hopefully in another contest!!


  • stavykm gold member
    August 30, 2007
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    I love it

    It's just what I was looking for. Thank you for entering my contest. Great write!!

  • stavykm gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    Excellent Write

    Thank you for entering my contest. I commented on the wrong page but I did comment. This is what I'm looking for. Thank you!!!


  • Kati Kat
    July 1, 2007
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    i likeses this lots♥

  • xXmiranda-maeXx
    July 1, 2007
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    LOVE IT!!!!!!I like it a lot I agree with them!! again I love it!!!!!!!!


  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    July 1, 2007

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    Wow...I absolutely loved this poem. I really liked how it was similar to a conversation. And the title; I can almost feel the pain of the kiss, and then death of the love that used to be. Well done.

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