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The Photo album

Pages flipping,
vision surfing,
lips sighing,
hands carressing
wedding album.

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10 words for- potpourri of memories

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  • GoddessHella
    July 9, 2007

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    very nice. you did a great job with this. i love the words you chose and how you used them . much love great job.


  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    I like this. You've beautifully described the memories, but also kept it in the present. It has a lovely effect on the poem.
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • HeavenScent4U
    July 1, 2007

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    this is so pretty wow
    best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • Desire gold member
    July 1, 2007

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for entering
    Your piece into my contest!
    Happy Happy Joy Joy


    **Now lets see what’s the Poet’s
    been cooking-

    Say potpourri…
    Appreciate Your Time
    for a Sleepover Quickie

    Have inhaled Your words…
    Have felt Your message…
    Please do not respond back…
    Want to keep this anonymous…


    Best wishes to You
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Shapla
    July 1, 2007

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    "Pages flipping,
    vision surfing,
    lips sighing,
    hands carressing
    wedding album"

    Beautiful my dear!!!! I guess you are missing your soul mate very much. Memories.....hmmm...they are worth keeping as the treasures of life.Well done

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