Young and nubile are you still;
disparate by your years of youth
from this older age of mine.
Yet there is something that we share,
that makes my heart to faster beat,
makes my eyes to brighter shine,
makes me hope, despite the gap in years,
that you will be my Valentine.
A contest entry
- Eight Inspirational Options - Give Me Something Wonderful by xxRainbowDawnxx.
500 points, ended July 12, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Fun Valentine by im only half empty.
700 points, ended January 30, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - III by N e a r.
4000 points, ended February 16, 2008, 121 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Will You Be My Valentine? by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 20, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Valentines day by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended January 26, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awe
This is just sooooo sweet. I like it. Thanks for sharing this with us. And thanks for enteirng it into this contest. Great write. -
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Trekkergirl
Thankyou for your words of praise and good wishes.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Josie
Thankyou, from Perth WA, for your comments and good wishes.
Shenton
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