Piercing blue~
like ice crystals
of frozen breath
your eyes dance
into my soul with
electrified sparks
of passion
six feet from the
edge of falling into
you –
not too far to
fall
kissing your lips,
I melt into drops
of liquid love
pouring myself over
and into you
confetti stars falling
all around in visions
of soothing caress
reflections of love
bouncing from your
eyes
of
-piercing blue
Author notes
Eyes will take you into a soul at a glance.
I love eyes and sometimes have to make myself not stare at the really mesmerizing one's ...lol.
I agree with the quickie thing...it's fun but it has gotten out of hand...give me some substance.
Thanks for the inspiration Sandy.
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A contest entry
- This Isn't What You Think!!!! by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 3, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Whew!
Oh my this was so stunning. Practically takes the breath away. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow, this poem is really beautiful. Amazing imagery and lovely metaphors. "I melt into drops
of liquid love" -- I love those lines; they are really sweet and touching. Good luck in the contest! -
This is so wonderfully beautiful, my friend
Sigh...
I LOVE this
Absolutely beautifully written!
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!!!! -
alluring and sensual...some eloquent romance that flows rapture in this excellent piece
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Thank you sweet Iggy.
Your comments are a blessing to my soul.
Always looking for them
Becky
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