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Dying Because of You

Dont you see what you are doing
Dont you see the harm you've caused
It's my heart your breaking
And you're pointing out my flaws

On the ground lays my heart
in the puddle of splattered blood
as you watch me fall apart
as my eyes give way and flood

i'm breaking down and cant stop now
and you dont even care
i'm choking on my words
and i am gasping for air

i'm trying to scream for help
trying to tell of my dispair
but no one even sees me
or hears my haunting screams

they all just get up and leave me
down goes my self-esteem

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  • fallenangel1317
    June 30, 2007
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    Very good

    I liked it. Good poem.


    • staticxpoet
      June 30, 2007
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      Thank you for taking the time to read my work, that means a lot. have a great night