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Bel

Resplendence in a magickal form
She lights the summer moon
And in the crisp and blustery air
She causes him to swoon
She, the light, and he, the moon

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  • blondone silver member
    June 30, 2007
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    words of beauty thank you...


  • blondone silver member
    June 30, 2007

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    a lovely write was kinda looking for 5 lines though I still think this is beautiful...thanks for entering

  • blondone silver member
    June 30, 2007
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    prompt is on page and 4 at one time awe your good

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